The Grammar Nazi Rides Again

I'm not usually much for poetry, but this one is appropriate, especially now in light of the positive changes happening to me.  I wrote this back in February, but it came to mind again today.  You've all heard my story, from disillusionment to depression to resurrection and rebuilding.  This pretty much captures it all.  Feedback is appreciated, both here and on Chase Down the Thunder, which you'll find in the post before this one.

~Adam

Current Mood: calm

This is the short story I wrote for my final exam in Creative Fiction Writing at Siena Heights during my Junior year.  I've expanded it slightly, but not much.  I'm open to any suggestions, criticisms, or comments, because I want this to be as good as I can get it.  And please be specific if you do have a suggestion.  I know the formatting is off in spots, and I tried to correct it, but it won't stick.  You can tell where a new paragraph starts.

Thanks again for reading.

~Adam

Current Mood: accomplished

Welcome to my writing journal.  Here, I'll be intermittently posting writing projects I've either completed or are working on presently.  The only thing you won't find on here is my novel, which is in progress and will remain secret until it's finished, unless you're my editor, and you know who you are, beantowngrlie. :-)  Feedback is always welcome, either as a comment on the current post or in an e-mail, which you'll find in my profile.

Thanks for visiting!

~Adam (roadwarrior220)

Current Mood: content